Three universal rules:
- Specific subject line.
- Short body (150-250 words).
- Clear ask.
Below are templates for the most common professional emails.
1. Job application
Subject: Application for [Role] — [Your Name]
Hi [Recruiter Name],
I'm applying for the [Role] at [Company]. I came across the role on [where].
One reason I think I'm a fit: [specific reason — number, project, skill that matches the JD].
Resume attached. Open to a quick call when you have time.
Best, [Your Name]
2. Application follow-up
Subject: Following up on [Role] application — [Your Name]
Hi [Recruiter Name],
I applied for the [Role] role on [Date] and wanted to follow up. Quick reason I think I'm a strong fit: [one specific thing].
Happy to share more if useful.
Best, [Your Name]
3. Thank-you after interview
Subject: Thanks for the conversation today
Hi [Interviewer Name],
Thanks for taking the time. I really enjoyed [one specific thing from the interview].
[One sentence reaffirming interest with specific connection.]
Open to next steps when you're ready.
Best, [Your Name]
4. Networking ask
Subject: Quick question about [topic]
Hi [Name],
I came across your work on [specific thing]. I'm exploring [related area] and would love to learn from your experience. Would you have 20 minutes for a quick call sometime in the next two weeks?
Thanks for considering — happy to work around your schedule.
Best, [Your Name]
5. Reference request
Subject: Asking if you'd be a reference
Hi [Name],
I'm starting a job search and wanted to ask if you'd be willing to be a reference. If yes, I'll let you know each time someone might reach out.
Thanks!
Best, [Your Name]
6. Resignation
Subject: Resignation — [Your Name]
Hi [Manager Name],
Please accept this email as formal notice of my resignation. My last day will be [Date], two weeks from today.
I'm grateful for the time at [Company] and happy to help with handoff.
Best, [Your Name]
What to avoid
- "I hope this email finds you well" (filler)
- Generic openers ("To Whom It May Concern")
- Long-winded backstory before the ask
- Multiple asks in one email
- Burying the lead
The bigger pattern
A professional email is a tool, not a ritual. Specific subject, short body, clear ask. Done.
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For more: how to write a job application email, thank you email after an interview, follow up email templates.
Frequently Asked Questions
- How long should a professional email be?
- 150-250 words. Most are too long. Short emails get read; long ones get scanned.
- Should I use 'Dear' or 'Hi' as a greeting?
- 'Hi' for most modern offices. 'Dear' for formal industries (law, finance, government, traditional publishing).
- What's a good email subject line?
- Specific. 'Application for Senior Engineer — Maya Chen' beats 'Inquiry.' Recipients filter by subject.
- Should I write 'Hope this finds you well'?
- Skip it. Recipients see this in 90% of emails and tune it out. Open with the actual point.